Here’s the final design. The thing I am least happy about in this design is a sense of an original composition. The component parts work well (I think) but it’s put together in a conventional overall design. It would be nice to do something more daring than this. Perhaps I don’t mean more daring but rather, more subtle. It is a bit too ‘in your face’ and the metaphors rather obvious, though I should say that I am not a fan of the obscure. It is one of my main gripes about contemporary art.
If the inclination takes me I might have another go. PS, I decided to do a deliberately scribbled on little moustache on the main character, I wonder why!